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"Questioning sessions" were always the same. The doctors wanted me to talk about what had happened and why this dementia has such a hold on me, yet they never really believed me when I told them the truth of the matter. Today, it's the same thing all over again. I'm ushered into another one of those nice little rooms and left alone to wait for the psychologist to arrive.
"Hartman, Matthew" reads the label on a file. All the notes about me and how crazy I've become, I presume. Not that I care enough to read through it. I know myself; I mean, if I was crazy, how would I know who I am? Contrariwise, if I wasn't crazy, would I even be able to understand myself? I suppose lunacy is just a part of who I am.
The doctor enters the room and shakes my hand. I could read his nametag but I don't bother to. He'll just be like all the other ones who end our sessions by giving me that look – you know, the one that mixes horror with confusion and tells you how little they think of types like you.
"Matthew, or do you prefer Matt?" He asks in the I'm-trying-to-be-nice-and-understanding voice.
I have to think about this. Seems that until today, I must've forgotten my own name, or even what I prefer to be called. "Matt. Because, doctor, it rhymes with 'hat'." I say this confidently and only realize after a brief silence that my reasoning sounded screwed up. Oh well, they'd think I'm loony anyways, with or without that wisely chosen comment.
Matt….because it rhymes with hat. Huh. There's something about that word. Hat, hatting, hatter – a person who has hats. Or makes hats. So if Matt was a hatter, I'd be a matter. That is; I'm just mad, crazy, impossibly demented. Mad Matt, maybe that's what the doctors and psychologists call me. But I know a place, in my head, where the others called me that. Wait, no. They called me the Mad Hatter. I tried to explain that my name was Matthew Hartman, but they just laughed and danced in a circle and decided to change my name. The initials didn't change, though, and that's why my faded brown coat has the letters M.H. sewn on it in gold thread.
Should have never been reading late at night while intoxicated. But I'm one of those people who can drink and retain a (mostly) clear head. Of course, it's hell to try and sleep when I've had a few. The result: reading at odd hours of the night. I think that's when it started; because instead of waking up in the morning with a hangover, I literally was woken up somewhere else. Not my bed, in my apartment, but slumped in a high-backed chair, with my face pressed against the long table in front of me.
Some stupid rabbit woke me up, saying that I'd be late for tea if I didn't get my bloody face off the tablecloth. Kind of had a crazy look in his eye. Pretty sure that it was contagious or something, because now I'm the one who's crazy. I tried to figure out where I was, but the rabbit and a mouse that decided to show up kept saying that I'd know when I'd know. I think that was a riddle for 'you should know your own home'. I wasn't who they thought I was, but I never said anything, just played along.
Years later, I think, in the middle of running away from some tall guy with a sharp red sword, I was transported back to my house. Well, it would've been my house if I hadn't been found in a coma. It was a miraculous recovery, but due to my strange story (which is undoubtedly the truth!) I've been trapped in these hospital halls ever since.
So in a way, that's why I'm sitting in an empty room, staring at a stupid white wall. I used to be Matthew, and now I'm Mad. What I am, I wouldn't be; and what I wouldn't be, I would. You see?
"Hartman, Matthew" reads the label on a file. All the notes about me and how crazy I've become, I presume. Not that I care enough to read through it. I know myself; I mean, if I was crazy, how would I know who I am? Contrariwise, if I wasn't crazy, would I even be able to understand myself? I suppose lunacy is just a part of who I am.
The doctor enters the room and shakes my hand. I could read his nametag but I don't bother to. He'll just be like all the other ones who end our sessions by giving me that look – you know, the one that mixes horror with confusion and tells you how little they think of types like you.
"Matthew, or do you prefer Matt?" He asks in the I'm-trying-to-be-nice-and-understanding voice.
I have to think about this. Seems that until today, I must've forgotten my own name, or even what I prefer to be called. "Matt. Because, doctor, it rhymes with 'hat'." I say this confidently and only realize after a brief silence that my reasoning sounded screwed up. Oh well, they'd think I'm loony anyways, with or without that wisely chosen comment.
Matt….because it rhymes with hat. Huh. There's something about that word. Hat, hatting, hatter – a person who has hats. Or makes hats. So if Matt was a hatter, I'd be a matter. That is; I'm just mad, crazy, impossibly demented. Mad Matt, maybe that's what the doctors and psychologists call me. But I know a place, in my head, where the others called me that. Wait, no. They called me the Mad Hatter. I tried to explain that my name was Matthew Hartman, but they just laughed and danced in a circle and decided to change my name. The initials didn't change, though, and that's why my faded brown coat has the letters M.H. sewn on it in gold thread.
Should have never been reading late at night while intoxicated. But I'm one of those people who can drink and retain a (mostly) clear head. Of course, it's hell to try and sleep when I've had a few. The result: reading at odd hours of the night. I think that's when it started; because instead of waking up in the morning with a hangover, I literally was woken up somewhere else. Not my bed, in my apartment, but slumped in a high-backed chair, with my face pressed against the long table in front of me.
Some stupid rabbit woke me up, saying that I'd be late for tea if I didn't get my bloody face off the tablecloth. Kind of had a crazy look in his eye. Pretty sure that it was contagious or something, because now I'm the one who's crazy. I tried to figure out where I was, but the rabbit and a mouse that decided to show up kept saying that I'd know when I'd know. I think that was a riddle for 'you should know your own home'. I wasn't who they thought I was, but I never said anything, just played along.
Years later, I think, in the middle of running away from some tall guy with a sharp red sword, I was transported back to my house. Well, it would've been my house if I hadn't been found in a coma. It was a miraculous recovery, but due to my strange story (which is undoubtedly the truth!) I've been trapped in these hospital halls ever since.
So in a way, that's why I'm sitting in an empty room, staring at a stupid white wall. I used to be Matthew, and now I'm Mad. What I am, I wouldn't be; and what I wouldn't be, I would. You see?
Literature
Empty Gardens
It was a wine-petaled pansy
that my mother pruned from the garden box;
it reminded me
that I had blossomed late and wilted.
At fourteen I created pansy petals of my own,
waking up with hot-fisted cramps
and the proof I was a woman.
I was not a rose, perennial,
as I went from blooming monthly
to not at all.
I would rather spend a day
curled up like the fetus I may never carry
than flat on my back wondering
why God allowed worse women than me
to bear children.
Literature
defeathered
and this is where we bury our hearts,
between self-defeating personality disorders
and burnt bridges and midnight ramblings
we promise ourselves aren’t true;
embedding our memories in forsaken homes
like it is a conscious decision to shed
our wings (reptiles don’t fly)
and maybe I am the monster of every
myth: wide-eyed and jagged toothed and
looking to regain a piece of myself the
world borrowed, many moons ago
as I falter and stumble over my own unaware
feet, wreaking havoc, reeking of self-acquittal--
all I ever wanted to do was belong.
dreams are flaws much like the hearts we
flaunt on our sleeves, and I seem to
have len
Literature
Seam Stress
The heaviness settled in like an anvil being dropped on me. I couldn't take the fog inside my head and the lead inside my heart anymore, so I sat in the sun to melt it away. I wanted to sear every surface until I couldn't feel anymore. What kind of life is that, though, to never feel anything? To never feel the joy of love; the way it wraps its arms around your heart and traces its fingertips along your veins? Even the pain of looking back at love's scattered memories is necessary to understand how beautiful the feeling once was; how lucky you were to have ever felt its lips press to your cheek, its breath collect in the hollow of your neck.
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One of the greatest challenges of the whole FFM: responding to another person's story written for this year's month of flash fiction.
The story I chose as inspiration was Deportation by ~DrawingInTheSky. Sorry if it seems like a vague inspiration piece, but I really used the concept of being "deported" from one's own subconscious.
Of course, just had to get the fourth - or fifth - Alice in Wonderland reference in this story. (actually, I think most of my stories this year are somewhat based on it)
Written for ,the month of flash fiction.
Word Count: 689
Day 29, CHALLENGE DAY - story inspired by another writer's piece from FFM 2012.
The story I chose as inspiration was Deportation by ~DrawingInTheSky. Sorry if it seems like a vague inspiration piece, but I really used the concept of being "deported" from one's own subconscious.
Of course, just had to get the fourth - or fifth - Alice in Wonderland reference in this story. (actually, I think most of my stories this year are somewhat based on it)
Written for ,the month of flash fiction.
Word Count: 689
Day 29, CHALLENGE DAY - story inspired by another writer's piece from FFM 2012.
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Let me just, hug you -clings- freaking, Hatter is like my third fav. character in Alice in Wonderland. To have this inspired by my piece is just fantastically brilliant. /words.
This came out really well, and I love the reasoning behind everything and the explanations, beautiful job!
I'm glad you found inspiration from my piece!
This came out really well, and I love the reasoning behind everything and the explanations, beautiful job!
I'm glad you found inspiration from my piece!