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Ritual of the Partygoers

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Usually past midnight
Empty streets, journey
Streetlights breaking the darkness.

               ~~~

Wanderers, storytellers
We’re invaders of space
Under fluorescent store lights.

               ~~~

Similar to being high;
Remembering how to feel,
Laughter that intoxicates.

               ~~~

Grocery bags with loot –
Stop to lounge on a curb –
New kind of college party,
    avoiding the mainstream.

               ~~~

Lone cars pass as strangers
We’ll inhale cookie dough
Chase down cold sodas
Talk of everything, nothing;
    life with close friends.
Haiku of the Week: September 22-28

Again, not a concrete format for haiku poetry. Deal with it. I like this free verse version + a slight bit of structure. The opposite, I like to think, of the last time I did a Haiku of the Week. Based on an ongoing friendship with good people, good times, instead of breaking off a friendship. Significantly better feeling. But yeah, we really party hardcore.

Content based on a late night earlier in that week. Some the wording inspired partially by this status update referring to the event, from my friend Jake:

"Years from now when I look back at my college life, I wont remember crazy parties, or getting wasted, or being arrested, or the hazing and pranks or any of the other stereotypical college memories. I will remember all the late nights sitting on a curb and eating cookie dough and string cheese talking about the mysteries of the universe with my closest friends.
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